Thanks for the comments, guys.
A few readers of the hard copy have already told me that they're confused by the 4th panel. The caption is deliberate gibberish. Mack's brain is fried (literally), so I was trying to convey a scrambled thought.
Also, Julio left an easter egg in panel 7. The leaflet above the caption has "Keith" spelled backwards.
Only 2 pages left for issue #2! Can't wait to read your reaction!
I'm sensing a little [i]Westworld[/i] or even [i]Assassin's Creed[/i] creeping in here ...
Think I'd best go and get my breath baited while I wait ...!
Keith Dallas at 1:43PM, July 2, 2008
Thanks for the comments, guys. A few readers of the hard copy have already told me that they're confused by the 4th panel. The caption is deliberate gibberish. Mack's brain is fried (literally), so I was trying to convey a scrambled thought. Also, Julio left an easter egg in panel 7. The leaflet above the caption has "Keith" spelled backwards. Only 2 pages left for issue #2! Can't wait to read your reaction!
TheMidge28 at 10:21AM, July 1, 2008
ha! after a breather.
royduncan100 at 10:01AM, June 30, 2008
wonderful
DAJB at 9:52AM, June 30, 2008
I'm sensing a little [i]Westworld[/i] or even [i]Assassin's Creed[/i] creeping in here ... Think I'd best go and get my breath baited while I wait ...!