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king101 on Sept. 30, 2010
So you guys think I have improved? I will take any advice.
at 4:29AM, Oct. 12, 2010
i wasn't going to keep them. And thanks.
at 3:45PM, Oct. 10, 2010
You have improved alot, I will admit. But one thing that annoys me is the mouth/expressions. Work on that.
at 4:13PM, Oct. 1, 2010
at 2:02PM, Oct. 1, 2010
Thanks for all the comments and advice. I will be make the changes in the next issue. (:
at 1:16PM, Oct. 1, 2010
When the blond guy starts talking you should have made his font a different color than the narrator.
Its not too bad but cut down on the empty space. A lot of it is unneccessary.
at 9:52AM, Oct. 1, 2010
Wow! Your skills have really improved! (*Clapping*)
at 5:19AM, Oct. 1, 2010
dont use so much outlined text! Speech bubbles when characters are talking. and the green doesnt look good with the red bg, id say use either a bluish background OR white text.
at 11:29PM, Sept. 30, 2010