4: Poor Little Guy
Captain Snivy on Jan. 4, 2011
Ok, you'll notice straight away that are several improvements in this chapter; there's now no white space around the panels, there's now speech bubbles, the font is more interesting, and there's a title across the top.
Well, I hope you like the improvements, and I hope that there'll be more fans and comments now…
happymouse at 2:22AM, Jan. 6, 2011
the text bubbles could use some outlines, the pannels as wel, that next time thingy, isnt really needed, is it? resize the stuff, by for example 300%, read lots of other comics, to get ideas and stuff. i can see improvement.