Well Is aw the second page (in preview) and it doesn't explain why they are fighting. You are wrong Etienne. Sure we want to know why they fight but we hope this an important fight or else it'd be stupid to start with it. And do your eally think youc an judge a spriting level? I never saw you do any sprites yet. Think about all of this next time.
Begin whit a battle it's original because tis situation give an high suspense because we want to know why these two caracther fight against but it's little confusing to but I know in the second page we will understand all of the ''why'' they do that. (and the spriting is very good) for this it's a 5
Personally I thought you were going to do a french comic. It is kind of confusing to start a story with a battle without knowing (the characters, the situation) anyway. Your sprites are as good as usual BUT I stilll think you should do it in french 'cause "Why you never give up" doesn't mean anything it should be "Why don't you ever give up" or something in those lines. Yup as you can see I'll be there to criticize you but don't worry it wil not be THAT painfull. Your dialogue could be deeper than just saying what they are doing but overall it's okay. And sicne you are my firend I give you five but don't expect just anybody to five you. And I fave to keep a tab on you. Good luck ^^
Heian at 9:21AM, Dec. 30, 2007
kool
masterdx at 7:32PM, Oct. 11, 2007
Well Is aw the second page (in preview) and it doesn't explain why they are fighting. You are wrong Etienne. Sure we want to know why they fight but we hope this an important fight or else it'd be stupid to start with it. And do your eally think youc an judge a spriting level? I never saw you do any sprites yet. Think about all of this next time.
Kanashigeni at 5:25PM, Oct. 11, 2007
scuse for the many faut it's because my keyboard have a problem totap the letter sometime
Kanashigeni at 5:23PM, Oct. 11, 2007
Begin whit a battle it's original because tis situation give an high suspense because we want to know why these two caracther fight against but it's little confusing to but I know in the second page we will understand all of the ''why'' they do that. (and the spriting is very good) for this it's a 5
masterdx at 4:28PM, Oct. 11, 2007
Personally I thought you were going to do a french comic. It is kind of confusing to start a story with a battle without knowing (the characters, the situation) anyway. Your sprites are as good as usual BUT I stilll think you should do it in french 'cause "Why you never give up" doesn't mean anything it should be "Why don't you ever give up" or something in those lines. Yup as you can see I'll be there to criticize you but don't worry it wil not be THAT painfull. Your dialogue could be deeper than just saying what they are doing but overall it's okay. And sicne you are my firend I give you five but don't expect just anybody to five you. And I fave to keep a tab on you. Good luck ^^
gekuke at 4:21PM, Oct. 11, 2007
Hooray