Chapter One - Page 1
Izzy on Jan. 21, 2006
Haha, I get a giant “F” for smooth transitioning, here. I don't think a comic does its job of explaining things if it can't, uh, explain things on its own. So, the first to the second panel is randomly quick, and in the last, One-Eye Girl “pop!”s in front of Alexander.
I suppose the biggest mistake I made on this page is that I dawdled on it long enough to become sick of it, which led to me rushing to get finished.
So here it is, the beginning of my new project.
Hi.
I'm underground or Kika-FM on the forums. Or, I was, anyway, until the Duck crashed. I used to run Underground Sanctuary, which only survived for about fifteen pages. It was a wanna-be manga with a potential story but a lazy author and a serious need of anatomical improvement.
Uh, since then, I've realized ‘hey webmanga is rampant and annoying’, so I've tried out a new style for the past few months. Insert another crazy story out of my head, some shading, music influences, stuff.
And here I am, back again.
Welcome!
rmmanuel at 12:32AM, Feb. 15, 2008
I love this :)
Terminal at 10:58PM, Oct. 17, 2006
The monochromic purple blue shows a sense of surrealism and depression, [i]well done[/i]. This is far different from your [i][url=http://www.drunkduck.com/Telenarius/index.php?p=84611]Underground[/url][/i] days
Conned at 10:01AM, Oct. 12, 2006
ooo creepy!
BigFishComic at 2:08PM, Oct. 11, 2006
oooooh now to sit and wait for all to be explained.
Bloodsoul at 9:47PM, Oct. 5, 2006
I wish I could shade like that...
6billionghosts at 10:14PM, June 13, 2006
i think i'll be able to relate well since i'm in an experimental jazz freak out band i like it so far!!
Randal at 10:15AM, Feb. 16, 2006
i like the monochrome look.
Miruku at 6:36AM, Feb. 5, 2006
Hey, it doesn't have to make sense yet, it's only the first page. Besides, it's uber pretty.
ZoeStead at 2:35AM, Feb. 4, 2006
I really like it :D
Izzy at 7:42AM, Jan. 25, 2006
Gibbo: Thankseeeee! :D NeilSama: Thanks for the five! Squee.
Gibbo at 4:51AM, Jan. 24, 2006
Ooh, a mysterious beginning... 'tis a good style yeh've got! Well played ^^
Izzy at 4:56PM, Jan. 23, 2006
IronWolf: Thank you so much! :) I'm glad it's captivating some interest. Hehe. subcultured: Thanks, I think! I'm too lazy to do a full color, too lazy to detail a black and white, and I decided to go with this. Simple enough for me to do and beneficial for the feel I'm going with. lothar: Hehe! We'll have to find that out shortly, won't we? ;) ccs: Kind of the feel I was going for! Glad it shows. Thank you. :) That also makes me feel confident in my current style. Mazoo: Muchos gracias! Seems like I've hooked some people who are interested in my story! Thanks a lot for the encouragement, you all. (Mmm, repetition.)
Mazoo at 2:04PM, Jan. 23, 2006
Weird, but good! It's a great intro page because it's really intriguing in the story.
ccs1989 at 6:00PM, Jan. 22, 2006
But good. I like it. Especially the unique style and the color scheme.
ccs1989 at 5:59PM, Jan. 22, 2006
Really...disturbing... and weird.
lothar at 5:52PM, Jan. 22, 2006
they look like ghosts !
subcultured at 5:50PM, Jan. 22, 2006
gradiation heaven
IronWolf at 1:46PM, Jan. 22, 2006
Hey -it's off too a very intersting start. Good luck!
Izzy at 11:45AM, Jan. 22, 2006
Thank you both for the comments and rating! :D By the way, Nieni - I can go with that last sentence. *looks around suspiciously.*
Nieni Springs at 10:45AM, Jan. 22, 2006
Haha, well, it may it a tad confusing, but the art still looks awesome. ^^ I figured the oddness was intentional for the creepy atmosphere.