Oh. It's mister criticism. Didn't you read the author comments?
You'll get better with Time. I was HORRIBLE at making sprite comics at first. and that's putting it mildly.
Here's list of "tips"
.Save as png.
.Don't color code text
.Inverting=bad
.Don't forget to fill out all the black(as you missed quite a bunch in some pannels)
.Don't ever mess with the back ground the way you did.
.Get paint.net for beter effects.
You did one good thing, however. You tried to use some sighn of motion.
Poki_rat at 10:16AM, May 31, 2007
This is a good start X) My first attempt had white backgrounds and poor conditioned sprites. It's the story that counts.
THKNN_NUL at 8:42PM, May 24, 2007
Oh. It's mister criticism. Didn't you read the author comments? You'll get better with Time. I was HORRIBLE at making sprite comics at first. and that's putting it mildly.
soonmme at 7:49PM, May 14, 2007
Here's list of "tips" .Save as png. .Don't color code text .Inverting=bad .Don't forget to fill out all the black(as you missed quite a bunch in some pannels) .Don't ever mess with the back ground the way you did. .Get paint.net for beter effects. You did one good thing, however. You tried to use some sighn of motion.