Alright this be my first day at Drunk Duck (my hands now tingle with erotic-I mean electric pleasure as I type this. Anyways I'm Mark and this is my webcomic. I hope you people like it.
This was the first strip which was completed around December last year. As you can tell it's really old and crappy. Don't worry, it gets better.
Hey Mark, thought I would pop over and take a look at what you have.
I also looked at your most recent strip so I am going back through the rest.
You might want to consider making your pages (and thereby your cells) larger. You're first two "in the game" cells are rather small and it is hard to make out what action is being taken between characters. With that and the heavy inking the artwork gets rather jumbled.
I'll hold off on the scripting for a sec here considering I haven't read all of this...
An interesting place to start...Lets see where it goes, eh?
Darwin at 7:17AM, Sept. 10, 2006
Hey Mark, thought I would pop over and take a look at what you have. I also looked at your most recent strip so I am going back through the rest. You might want to consider making your pages (and thereby your cells) larger. You're first two "in the game" cells are rather small and it is hard to make out what action is being taken between characters. With that and the heavy inking the artwork gets rather jumbled. I'll hold off on the scripting for a sec here considering I haven't read all of this... An interesting place to start...Lets see where it goes, eh?
josif at 8:03AM, Aug. 30, 2006
didn't really know what was going on...