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YOI on Sept. 29, 2008
This is the last page, hopefully I will have time in the future to write more for this story. I really love the characters and I think there are so much potentials for growth. But I'm always working on 10 projects at the same time so it might take some time before I could get back to this. Thanks for reading :)
YOI at 7:42PM, Nov. 22, 2008
Yes unfortunlately, this is done for a ocad club and we're only limited to 8 pages so I have to squeeze things in the frames ^^;
Artificer Urza at 5:05PM, Nov. 22, 2008
Well, this feels too short; you could have done so much more than what you've shown here... but I guess you had your reasons.
alejkhan at 8:04PM, Nov. 5, 2008
That was a really fun story! I do hope you continue it someday (soon)!
Sei at 10:19PM, Oct. 1, 2008
That was a great introduction, I enjoyed it immensely. The characters indeed have a great deal of potential for growth- supplemented with your amazing art ability, style and technique, this'll become something even better. The only small thing that needs to be in check is grammar and tenses. It's a little tricky if it's a second language for you but from what is written, I can see what's implied. Maybe you can get a friend to help with editing your script? All in all, fantastic job and I hope to see more things from you :3. ~Sei.