Prolouge 3- An Introduction of Sorts
Beat Fu on May 3, 2006
Finaly, ready and willing to show you the jazzyness of what's to come. The whole cast is assembled. Next up is the flashback, aka chapter one. Nice.
Anyway, please, critiques will help me with a project. Regular comments are always nice as well
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Reitheneko at 1:45PM, May 8, 2006
I knew the car could drive on water but I didn't know the kids could walk on it XD Spookeh Beat. Critiques? Ummm... The background in the pannel behind the hand is very blank, and there is no interesting contrast. You could put some sort of pattern back there, so that the hand pops out more. And for some reason I think that the ocean-waves-water stuff needs to be darker shades. So... like... more sketchiness in it? It is kind of hard to make things lighter or darker when you are doing it all in black and white XD I wants the grey scale back!
Miruku at 11:07AM, May 4, 2006
Ooh, nice lineart!
Jessi at 8:48AM, May 4, 2006
Love the line art so far, very crisp and neat. And I really like the sweet quiet one.