Ok... theres at least a dozen things that need fixing on this. The pannels are wwaayy to large for this type of thing. The flow of the comic is very scratchy. some of the text is hard to read (the yellow mostly), your tryin to pull effects that wont work in MS Paint, and its all over the place and random (hard to follow).
But the accual sprites and balance are good. You have potential here, you just gotta better the comic and use it. Im not saying its bad, it just needs some major work to improve it. Hope u dont find that offensive...
one suggestion. Possibly choose less bright colours for the green and yellow text? possibly very dark green and dark orange could be used instead? because i can't actually read the yellow text :)
Zippo Prower at 12:45PM, Sept. 28, 2007
Yeeek, the bitmixing, normally I don't hold this against comics but, it just doesn't work here!!!
riotgunner at 6:20PM, Oct. 28, 2006
its easy to find sprites that all the same style try mystical forest zone act 4
The mediocre one at 6:16PM, Oct. 28, 2006
this is a joke, right? please tell me this is a joke.
Chao Friend at 4:47PM, April 29, 2006
Yo bub I can't read the yellow font so change it. Please. A lot more people will like it if you use a different color.
the2pacfan47 at 8:37PM, March 25, 2006
Ok... theres at least a dozen things that need fixing on this. The pannels are wwaayy to large for this type of thing. The flow of the comic is very scratchy. some of the text is hard to read (the yellow mostly), your tryin to pull effects that wont work in MS Paint, and its all over the place and random (hard to follow). But the accual sprites and balance are good. You have potential here, you just gotta better the comic and use it. Im not saying its bad, it just needs some major work to improve it. Hope u dont find that offensive...
Zeke5 at 2:44PM, Jan. 21, 2006
all i found
Zeke5 at 2:44PM, Jan. 21, 2006
Zeke:i have
Jordantosh at 1:03PM, Jan. 21, 2006
Might want to get Photoshop...
KevinClifford at 10:51AM, Jan. 21, 2006
You like mixed bits ... that's like bad ...
Zeke5 at 10:01AM, Jan. 21, 2006
read sonic revolution it's funny
Zeke5 at 10:00AM, Jan. 21, 2006
Zeke: I'll do my best.
elenawing at 9:35AM, Jan. 21, 2006
one suggestion. Possibly choose less bright colours for the green and yellow text? possibly very dark green and dark orange could be used instead? because i can't actually read the yellow text :)