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Kane wo Narashite on June 18, 2009
Sorry about how long it took, I'm visiting my family and friends back home! XD I'm so happy that I've come this far already, and I can't wait to get the next few pages up, because this is where the story really begins~
Thanks for all your support, it means a lot to me!
agentny003 at 7:54AM, Nov. 17, 2017
i love the top panel and i agree keep going.
CherryBomb at 10:16PM, Nov. 5, 2010
I am quite interested in the story :) Please continue!
gumonshoes at 7:09PM, June 21, 2009
^^
Mutation at 4:39AM, June 19, 2009
Friends and Family over comic definitely. n.n The page and dialogue is quite good this page, but the word bubbles are not your best. O_o Try reading them out loud when you put them down, detecting where pauses in speech would make sense (Also I recommend typing the words, then finalizing the bubble!) I also recommend '...'s in batches of three only. Sorry if I tend to say to much stuff... n.n;