this may be youre first comic but you should read a tutriol (I read 10 or so before I started) the joke is ok for a biginer(wich you are) you need a bg the boxes are not that great and the colered text is unnesacary in the 1st pannel also comics should be biger
1t least 4 panels in my opinion. however this is beter that most 1st pages
tailsonic at 2:57PM, Oct. 20, 2006
Even if Knuxallen is my brother,my brother don't know crud,have you seen his comics?
knuxallen at 2:15PM, Oct. 20, 2006
that totaly sucks! SO MUCH!!!
Jak0070 at 7:31PM, Oct. 17, 2006
lol it good but need work too big panels bad bubbles 2 panels and they r hovering an inch off the ground 4 for all the mistakes
Scorchgofer at 7:04PM, Oct. 17, 2006
...Soonme has a point... But yu also forgot to give credit to the spriters/rippers of the sprites. But still pretty good for a first.
soonmme at 5:45PM, Oct. 17, 2006
this may be youre first comic but you should read a tutriol (I read 10 or so before I started) the joke is ok for a biginer(wich you are) you need a bg the boxes are not that great and the colered text is unnesacary in the 1st pannel also comics should be biger 1t least 4 panels in my opinion. however this is beter that most 1st pages