Page 4 Character Profile : Orrin Beaumont
arcade81 on Oct. 1, 2007
Art: This picture has been stuck in my head since i sketched it. My mental colouring wasnt a patch on this version. Needless to say Im pleased.
Story: The Next page will be a similliar full page to introduce the female protagonist.
Thanks for reading
salasvexx at 10:01AM, Oct. 11, 2007
Opps, simplicity, im an idiot....
salasvexx at 9:58AM, Oct. 11, 2007
ART- I like the simlicity you put on your characters, and your layouts, good stuff. curious, Do you have a story written out or do you play it by ear? Story- Arcade, you have some potential here. On one selfish hand I want you to hurry and get to the climax (or as you put it) "meat" of the story But on the other hand, I want you to wait and build up the characters and plot, thus making the wait agonizing yet more satisfing at the end. Either way, I'll be reading- 5
kyupol at 6:05PM, Oct. 3, 2007
nice coloring and poses. Though I think faces need a minor adjustment. Thanks for droppin by my comic though.
ShinGen at 8:21AM, Oct. 3, 2007
As said before, great coloring. Is that a chocobo? Anyways nicely done.
x2_gon at 11:36PM, Oct. 2, 2007
Great coloring!
Shao at 5:13PM, Oct. 2, 2007
forgot to rate, nyah x3
Shao at 5:13PM, Oct. 2, 2007
I love the coloring. You did a good job making the lit and darkened area's balanced. you're really good. =3