I agree with Chronicaust, you really need to clean up your images. In some cases the text was nearly impossible to read because of the grey fuzziness.
I'm going to go out on a limb and assume this is a first try (second, maybe) at making a comic. The best tip I can give you art-wise is to have someone -friend, family member- pose in the position you want your character to be in. They don't need to stay that way, just long enough for you to get an idea of how someone will look in the position you're going for. It really helps.
Keep it up!
rmmanuel at 4:08AM, Jan. 11, 2008
Neat!!!!
Randal at 12:00AM, Feb. 19, 2006
agreed.
Green_Tangerine at 9:33PM, Jan. 16, 2006
I agree with Chronicaust, you really need to clean up your images. In some cases the text was nearly impossible to read because of the grey fuzziness. I'm going to go out on a limb and assume this is a first try (second, maybe) at making a comic. The best tip I can give you art-wise is to have someone -friend, family member- pose in the position you want your character to be in. They don't need to stay that way, just long enough for you to get an idea of how someone will look in the position you're going for. It really helps. Keep it up!
Chronicaust at 8:58PM, Jan. 15, 2006
I just read them all. Try typing the words and work on your drawing a little. Good storyline though, you're definately onto something.