A few comments/suggestions:
1. Some parts of the page look a bit rough (like the grass in the last panel) and could use some editing.
2. Maybe adding facial expressions would enhance the quality of the comic (unless it's against your style which is ok then).
3. The earlier pages weren't half bad so keep it up.
Jules at 3:35PM, June 17, 2008
A few comments/suggestions: 1. Some parts of the page look a bit rough (like the grass in the last panel) and could use some editing. 2. Maybe adding facial expressions would enhance the quality of the comic (unless it's against your style which is ok then). 3. The earlier pages weren't half bad so keep it up.