Getting Started
Theskunktrainer on Nov. 22, 2009
Welcome to my English 237 Project!
As you can probably tell, this is all still in the works. But that's part of the point- I need people to respond to my narrative as I create it. After I put up the first 5-7 pages, I will then look at how people have responded and make another page or two or something based on that. I am trying to examine both my own family's history as well as the structure of different narrative forms and how they are created/influenced by other people.
So what I need you to do! Is follow the comic, and then respond however you like, either on here, on my facebook if we're friends, or in another blog on my xanga that anyone is able to comment on (no sign up required). What you can respond with:
-Suggestions
-Criticism
-Questions
-Compliments
-Ideas, thoughts
-Anything
Go crazy, seriously. I look forward to hearing from you. Forward this to anyone you think would be interested. My goal is to have the comic update just 2 or 3 times overall, so check back probably after thanksgiving break for the next several page installment.
Love you! Thank you! ~Mari
Lemniskate at 12:38PM, Dec. 3, 2009
You should change the word balloons in the first panel so that the reader reads the "ghost costume" one first. Also, much text, slightly frightening. Very meta, making the search for... well, the topic of the... assignment? into the topic. ... [i]What[/i] exactly are you doing?
harkovast at 7:39AM, Dec. 3, 2009
If you need a KKK hood I can post you one of mine.