Gertrude & Brunhilda 75

KAM on June 20, 2007

You may have noticed that this isn't part of the S.M.O.G. storyline. No, it hasn't ended it's just that I realized I was jumping over stuff that really shouldn't be jumped over.

I think I mentioned that one problem with this storyline is that it's a comic book idea told in webcomic form & that's where the problem lies.

A webcomic page has to stand on it's own with a beginning, middle & end, usually with a cliffhanger or punchline. A comic book page on the other hand is part of a whole book so it doesn't need to stand alone.

However in making sure the pages stand alone I end up leaving out some stuff that helps tell the story.

So I'm going to do some more work on the script so it flows a little smoother than it had been.

*knock wood*

Man, add t-shirts to the girls' outfits & suddenly they look like they're in their underwear.

This cartoon follows a cartoon from Public Humiliation

Kira Ani McGrath's comic (the other KAM)

This may or may not be a part of the Crossover Wars