Issue 1- The Beginning
1337 on May 5, 2007
This is Issue 1. It starts off with Ryan, Roy, and Samantha walking to the laboratory.
1337 on May 5, 2007
This is Issue 1. It starts off with Ryan, Roy, and Samantha walking to the laboratory.
Supah Sonic at 7:22PM, Jan. 18, 2010
dude why do you people complain at least he is making one just hope its entertain and ya i know it needs to be resized but its like the same people going on to pokemon comics and criticizing them you guys are just picky but then when it cmes to other comics nobody cares so just give him a break its his first comic
TBustah at 4:25AM, March 19, 2009
Eh, I kinda like the way the text is. It's something new, at least. But yeah, everything's way too small. Actually, there are 14 starters if you count Pikachu and Eevee. And although I kind of agree with these guys about not using them, there isn't anything really WRONG with you doing that. It's just that there are dozens of Pokemon sprite comics on this site, and almost all of them follow the "starter" format. If you wanna be noticed, ya gotta try something new. I should mention that this is actually not half bad for a first try. I've seen a lot worse than this.
Walrus at 11:59AM, Jan. 2, 2008
1. Needs speechbubbles. 2.And get rid of the last panel. 3. There is a lot of blank space in panel 5 and almost as much in panel one. 4. The panels are to small, enlarge them and the characters. 5. There are 493 Pokemon in case you didn't know, use any of them except for the 12 starters. 6. This page is also a bit to small.
KevinClifford at 1:14PM, May 7, 2007
I'm also the first person to critique pokémon comics... Too many people start at 9 PM :-/
Sea_Cow at 8:03PM, May 6, 2007
Criticism from Kevin on your first comic page. Ouch. CONSTRUCTIVE, true, but criticism nonetheless. Don't worry; That's not all you'll get.
KevinClifford at 7:40PM, May 6, 2007
Okay, here we go: 1.) Resize. It's to small to see the characters, or anything :( Make sure you only use stretch/skew (with an image Select-All'd) in the stretch enter field, and only with numbers that end in 00 (like 200, 300, etc.) 2.) Use real textboxes, don't have the text next to an image of who's talking. Use the one's that a normal comic uses. You can't put it there for one reason, and one reason only. The panels are so bloody small :( And lastly: 3.) Do not use starters. Starters make an author fail at life, be original. 4.) Your characters need emotions. Emotions are normally easier to put on them if they are enlarged. Hope this helped :D