GeneralGuy at 1:52PM, Oct. 16, 2006

Yeah, I help him with this. Actually Captain Flame Guy made a small cameo in General Madness.

Captain Flame Guy at 1:51PM, Oct. 16, 2006

It all happened the same time.

yoshirider4 at 12:47PM, Oct. 16, 2006

This better not be the same plot as general madness.

Captain Flame Guy at 11:02AM, Oct. 16, 2006

Fixed some errors, 2 are not fixed because I'm lazy. I'm going to work on my next one right now.

MicahIsMe at 8:39AM, Oct. 16, 2006

I agree with GeneralGuy. This [i]is[/i] good for your first comic. Fav'd

Captain Flame Guy at 2:32AM, Oct. 16, 2006

Eh, It took a long time to make this comic, So it would take even more work. I'll fix the spelling mistakes.

GeneralGuy at 1:28AM, Oct. 16, 2006

(Um, damn, because I edited the title it says I made the comment now -.-'')

GeneralGuy at 1:22AM, Oct. 16, 2006

There's a few spelling errors and all, (it's explosion, remember? =P) but it's pretty good for your first comic.

Mega Greg at 10:13PM, Oct. 15, 2006

Here's some helpful tips. The coloums need to be bigger. Try using the second line size, that seems to help. The tails for the speech bubbles needs a little work too. Try bigger lines. And you've been fav'd!