p34 - Orange Word Exchange 7
Redemption on Sept. 22, 2009
Corbin would find it easier to make friends if he didn't open his mouth. Time to come up with a short title for the next scene…
Today I realised Timeloss is 6 pages longer than the last (failed) attempt at making a comic. What a relief.
Thanks for reading.
tammster at 1:13PM, March 2, 2010
Wow what details, what colors. A treat to look at. Great style.
Redemption at 5:05PM, Sept. 25, 2009
Istaerlus: They did take their time in taking off, didn't they? Well, time tearing apart can't be THAT urgent. :] Thanks. Ryan_Scott: Wait, shouldn't you be more of a tidy kiwi? Litterer! Harkovast: You amazing, possibly INSANE person! Whoa - thanks for all the comments! I know what you mean - I don't mind the manga style but there's a lot of overused cliches that can get skindeep and a bit irritating. Yeeeeahhh... still getting around to a bit of an explanation next scene. I may need to stop being so tight-lipped with exposition. :D Thank you again! Repoman: Thank you! I'm still trying my best to get a better handle on this comicking thing. DAJB: Coming from you, that's a huge boost. Thank you. Still trying to learn how to pull of panels and pacing more effectively. Peipei: Thanks for the rating! SlideStudios: Likewise - thanks for your rating. Starwolf: Thanks for stopping by and leaving a rating.
DAJB at 11:54PM, Sept. 23, 2009
Just gets better and better!
repoman at 9:35PM, Sept. 23, 2009
Excellent stuff.
harkovast at 4:34PM, Sept. 23, 2009
Aaaaand I'm up to date! Great art, with a nice original style. I almost didn't start reading this becuase I assumed it would just be more manga and I find visually boring (it all looks the same to me.) Good stuff, though you are torturing me with the slow reveal of what is going on!
Ryan_Scott at 3:56PM, Sept. 23, 2009
Man I was wondering where my shopping list had blown off to...
istaerlus at 3:51PM, Sept. 23, 2009
Looks like they made their exit just in time, with the world disintegrating like that.
Redemption at 2:05PM, Sept. 23, 2009
Hugo Maximo: Thanks for rating and reading. LBH: I'm very glad you think so, thank you! I hope I can keep it interesting. Phillby: Quoth Amanda, Corbin's a little punkface. Shouldn't think anybody's keen on giving him fashion help. ;] Lilac: Yes, whatever could they be? They're all very different but, in other ways, they're all the same... does that clear it up? ;] Thanks Lilac! Amanda: I sure hope its biodegradable paper, or Keri should get some quality community service time. >:[ Thanks! Theorah: Thanks for stopping by and rating. Newgirlcomic: Thank you also for stopping by and rating.
amanda at 10:51AM, Sept. 23, 2009
Litterer! *shakes fist* ^.^
Lilac at 9:48AM, Sept. 23, 2009
Oh...now I wonder what they all are...O:
Phillby at 9:19AM, Sept. 23, 2009
Someone should tell Corbin his turtleneck is stuck to his chin again.
LBH at 6:14AM, Sept. 23, 2009
This story is mad interesting... Im curious to see where its goin' Keep up the good job!