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dragonsong12 on Oct. 8, 2018
Yes, let's do.
For a while I had expected to refer to him as “Rat” in the author's notes of these early pages since it was the closest thing he had to a name…but when the pages posted I couldn't bring myself to do it. Ultimately I just avoided having to use any name at all.
Thanks for reading! See you next week!
ejb at 7:54PM, Oct. 8, 2018
The body language, especially the cowering in the second panel, is quite good here.
dragonsong12 at 7:05PM, Oct. 9, 2018
Telling the story more through the art than through the dialogue is something I've been focusing on. Thank you!
ejb at 7:50PM, Oct. 8, 2018
It's definitely a start.