Hehe. It's very cyuuuute.
Resizing the image would be a good thing. You might also want to do the text via computer. Handwritten is okay sometimes, but text is just easier on the eyes.
If you are unsure where to do these things you can do them both in MSPaint.
Mmmm. Cookies.
wind at 4:19PM, Oct. 7, 2006
lol
Jortaro at 9:08AM, Sept. 24, 2006
apart from the page size everything else is good. also NEVER refuse giving a cookie to others (they WILL hurt you just to get one)
Frail at 2:06PM, Sept. 6, 2006
Hehe. It's very cyuuuute. Resizing the image would be a good thing. You might also want to do the text via computer. Handwritten is okay sometimes, but text is just easier on the eyes. If you are unsure where to do these things you can do them both in MSPaint. Mmmm. Cookies.
theduckofanime at 6:39PM, Sept. 4, 2006
The art is nice, but yeah image resizing.
lefarce at 7:47PM, Sept. 2, 2006
resize the image before you host it. It's far too big.
Sombrerin at 7:29PM, Sept. 2, 2006
Hahaha Its kind a cute xD but, you need to make it more...small, its to big @_@ But, I like the idea, and its to damn cute xD hahaha go on! =D