the 2 new characters on the right are like that because of their personalities
anyway, i'm not continuing with this comic
it's being rewriten into "The Forgotten Memories"
the plot is a little bit the same except for that i added more twists and surprises :D
you may be a bit more careful on the 2nd panel, the 3 people in the background are so tiny. It doesn't have any impact. Also on the last panel, since the custom are black, the two characters on the left doesn't seperate too well. Last but not least, think about how you apply tone affect to maximine your focus area. Remember that all focus area should have the higest contrast.
And the three new character, the one on the left is alright, but two on the right need to develope a little more. Cuz they look almost the same. Need to have more facial expression, eye expression, body expression to create more tension, just like how you tilted the panel. It created a tension versus the vertical border line.
I like how you keep up with the story. And i like the plot, I hope it turn into something interesting. I'll come back once awhile to see how far you go. Don't let me down.
does it really look like a kimono, cause Iheidi aint from japan, nor does she practise adny jap things, oh well shoes, that I have to practis eon toens more.. thanks.!!
i sense the jealosy of a 3 way girl gangbeating. Happens too much if you ask me. Still, awesome comic! when you're rich and famous, don't forget about the little people!
bubublacz at 7:13AM, April 12, 2007
nice! it reminds me of another anime story, i think it was fruits basket. anyways! love it! u rock!
Naru at 11:01AM, July 9, 2006
looks good so far
Rina_ran at 2:44AM, July 8, 2006
I like your lines a lot. Your characters really hop from one emotion to another quickly. I'll watch this, looks good. ^_^
alexisneo at 9:50AM, July 4, 2006
sweet 8D very proffesional done x3~~ keep up the grat work!
Darkest1 at 12:03PM, June 29, 2006
Wow 0.0 this looks professionally drawn. Even the odd mutant chibi things. This is awesome! Must keep an eye on it. Nice. ^^
What A Life at 11:30PM, June 28, 2006
the 2 new characters on the right are like that because of their personalities anyway, i'm not continuing with this comic it's being rewriten into "The Forgotten Memories" the plot is a little bit the same except for that i added more twists and surprises :D
guitar at 7:58PM, June 28, 2006
you may be a bit more careful on the 2nd panel, the 3 people in the background are so tiny. It doesn't have any impact. Also on the last panel, since the custom are black, the two characters on the left doesn't seperate too well. Last but not least, think about how you apply tone affect to maximine your focus area. Remember that all focus area should have the higest contrast. And the three new character, the one on the left is alright, but two on the right need to develope a little more. Cuz they look almost the same. Need to have more facial expression, eye expression, body expression to create more tension, just like how you tilted the panel. It created a tension versus the vertical border line. I like how you keep up with the story. And i like the plot, I hope it turn into something interesting. I'll come back once awhile to see how far you go. Don't let me down.
ZoeStead at 12:24PM, June 28, 2006
Really well drawn manga!
chichi8839 at 4:48AM, June 26, 2006
hey may I ask what pen do u use..
chichi8839 at 4:44AM, June 26, 2006
does it really look like a kimono, cause Iheidi aint from japan, nor does she practise adny jap things, oh well shoes, that I have to practis eon toens more.. thanks.!!
mimiche at 7:57PM, June 25, 2006
I would join the fan club too! Im just cool like that XD Awesome page- The tree effect is awesome o___o;; lol
draco_malfoy_lover at 12:07PM, June 14, 2006
this comic looks very much like Fruits Basket............. but I like it anyway
zero6532 at 11:36AM, May 28, 2006
i sense the jealosy of a 3 way girl gangbeating. Happens too much if you ask me. Still, awesome comic! when you're rich and famous, don't forget about the little people!
What A Life at 3:03PM, May 24, 2006
that's actually what i wanted a lot of online comics tend to be fast going i want to make my a little slower
Ninja_Jette at 11:45AM, May 23, 2006
Yay this is great! Oh so Takashi sure is a popular one isnt he^^
loudness at 9:00AM, May 18, 2006
erhm ha do whatever you want but I luv the What A Life traditional up and down strip!
What A Life at 3:42PM, May 12, 2006
um, actully, im rewritting the comic i ws planing on tell everyone about it after i get several pgs done.
Kagomas at 5:41PM, May 11, 2006
I'm still kind of expecting something really huge to happen! Like....like..........I dunno. A big hole in the space time conundrum or something!
chichi8839 at 4:52PM, April 25, 2006
hi i update
jxknight at 1:09PM, April 24, 2006
looking nice!
FYD at 7:45PM, April 23, 2006
X3 Your manga-skills are so freaking amazing! Ohhh, I shall practice to get as good as you! Please keep up the awesomeness! :3
FYD at 7:45PM, April 23, 2006
X3 Your manga-skills are so freaking amazing! Ohhh, I shall practice to get as good as you! Please keep up the awesomeness! :3
animegal12 at 1:49PM, April 23, 2006
another fa-club for the cute boy? happens in alot of mangas, but never gets old.