poliwirl100 at 2:24PM, Aug. 14, 2008

its good for a begginer but at least you will improve oh and seriously you need a plot but random fighting can be good to show people what you think when two people fight that cannot in the anime

Deathbeamz at 2:28PM, Feb. 27, 2008

first off, dont mix bittages, second use backgrounds, third, use speach bubbles, fourth have an actual plot, not just random fighting. i hate people with sucky comics like this. oh and dont use mspaint special effects

Collossus at 6:46PM, Nov. 9, 2007

You did not do this well at all...