Priest_Revan at 5:10PM, Oct. 27, 2007

The circle thing has to go... try and work on the facial expressions and bodies. Line art needs to be worked on and fix a little bit on the colour. Overall, not bad.

Uzzy at 3:39PM, Oct. 27, 2007

thank you!!!! i will take into consideration its my first time so im a bit of a n00b XD

7384395948urhfdjfrueruieieueue at 10:09AM, Oct. 27, 2007

I think that the circle mouth should go and you should resize it down a tick. Otherwise it's pretty good. :)