giovanni at 11:25AM, Nov. 19, 2007

panel 9, rearrange your phrase either "we can break it" or "it can be broken"

ZeroOfDeath at 6:07AM, Nov. 17, 2007

You might want to have someone proof read the issues before posting them since your mother tongue isn't English.

KrisalidX at 9:10PM, Nov. 8, 2007

They are the Kids versions, I must have to work in the actual form sprites ;) Thanks

Drei_Ultimate at 3:18PM, Nov. 8, 2007

You couldn't give them names? Story-wise, this is getting good, but the visuals(main character sprites) aren't too good. They aren't very creative for Pa&Pr's human/reploid forms.

Willah at 5:46PM, Nov. 7, 2007

The comic is looking great so far, I cant wait to make more of the story line for it