AddanacCity at 8:33AM, April 30, 2009

Great first page!

harkovast at 2:38PM, Jan. 4, 2009

Looks good so far.

Stuzoink at 4:55PM, Nov. 6, 2008

good flow of your panels, I find myself getting bogged down with too many crazy transitions when I do more than three or four. Keep up the great work!

croxtonhas at 5:54PM, Sept. 8, 2008

you definatly have skills!

Amelius at 3:49PM, June 7, 2008

Very nice expressions on this page, I'm impressed with those eyes! That's a very intense look he has there.

MrSynnerster at 4:55AM, March 25, 2008

okay, I'm already hooked. Nice start.

cyberdog at 9:02AM, Feb. 19, 2008

Wow, thanks guys. This is my first comic. I'll keep my fingers crossed.

Rhykker at 8:12PM, Feb. 17, 2008

Great use of panels.