Mikazuki Winter Wolf at 10:40PM, Feb. 26, 2010

like I said on your other comic, I love how you handdraw it..... I can see you improvement... I was considering waiting until I bought a program to start making my comic but you have inspired my to draw with free hand ^.^

Darth Mongoose at 1:29PM, Sept. 4, 2008

You're really improving! The characters are looking more expressive now, and there's a good sense of movement to the poses on this page, even though it's not an action page. The bodies look a lot looser and more three-dimensional than they used to. I'll give you your practice point for this page. Wrists. Your hands and arms aren't bad, but it looks like you're not confident drawing where they meet, so try looking at some wrists to see how that works. Oh, and by the way, the hair looks great on this page.