Taco5 at 5:53PM, May 27, 2010

Oh, and use speech bubbles, also put the text of the one speaking first...yes, I know since this comic's dead, it won't matter...

Taco5 at 5:51PM, May 27, 2010

Dead, improper grammar, and the story isn't good....I'd give it a 0, but unfortunately the lowest I can give is 1, so I won't rate it at all...

jameswolf100 at 7:19AM, April 14, 2010

this is turning out to be a good story

reddragon142 at 2:47PM, July 23, 2009

sycer i dont remember srry :(

Sycer at 9:20AM, July 23, 2009

Where did you get the Sprite of Madara on page one?

justover6 at 5:21PM, May 22, 2009

It's pretty good lol like the idea of an army of clone team 7 hahaha