It begins
chary on Jan. 7, 2006
Hey there.
Welcome to my comic,I know I'm not so good at drawing but I'll do my best to make a decent comic =). Hope you like the first page.(And understand what's going on)
chary
demonlife
chary on Jan. 7, 2006
Hey there.
Welcome to my comic,I know I'm not so good at drawing but I'll do my best to make a decent comic =). Hope you like the first page.(And understand what's going on)
chary
Cheeko at 8:11PM, Jan. 9, 2006
Overall it is very rough, but I really admire you for putting in all those backgrounds!! I never seem to have enough patience to to that. The composition in most of the panels are really good, too. Kytri is right, though, you may want to try inserting speech bubbles. Otherwise, great work! I look forward to seeing what happens. ^^
kytri at 4:52PM, Jan. 8, 2006
I can follow it alright. Your art's rough yeah, but everyone's gotta start somewhere. Kudos for actually drawing backgrounds and bodies and not just the characters' faces. You might wanna try and put actual bubbles behind your text though, it's difficult to read in the first panel because of the dark background.