Is this any good?

honestly it feels strange, even if my comic was featured, no likes no comments…should i take you don't like the story? i'm giving my everything for this shit, so it's a little sad. i would really like to know some opinions, having all in my head is a little unconfortable. i won't change things just because people said to do that, but at least i want to know if there are problems with the translastion, or if my drawings are understandable, i know i'm not a professional, that's why i want to grew, and your help would be really appreciated. thaks everyone for your attention and your time.