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SolarCell's Plot and summary
cdmalcolm1 at 10:25AM, Oct. 30, 2014
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First issue:SolarCell and Dark Beauty start out fighting each other while destroying the a city in another universe.

A general from this universe calls for a Super Meta Human going by the name Voltfor that can open doors to other random universes. Voltfor in the past opened up a Doorway into a Nth/Shard Univesre and discovered Shard. Voltfor discovered that using Shard make people forget who and what they are.  Voltfor also discover that the Nth universe was also a Stable doorway to other Stable Doorways which he could not do on his own. the Shard allows him to find the Nth universe which in turn makes him see the stable links the Nth universe has on other connected Multiverse.

Voltfor used his powers to capture both Dark Beauty and Solarcell then used the Shards to make them forget who they are before throwing them into the doorway leading to the HA universe.SolarCell and Dark Beauty Fell from space onto Canadian Soil. .

Wireless Sees first hand the “falling Star” and blow up in a heavy dense forest. He discovers dark beauty first. she get away from him. Discovers Solarcell second and finds out she is not so aggressive towards him.

He calls HUB for Bombshell, and Bombshell sends Ruffrat to help. (Wireless can not enter US Soil because he does not have a Passport. Bombshell knows this and will explain during the story.)

RuffRat helps Solarcell get comfortable until she can meet Bombshell in person.

RuffRat wakes up SolarCell and discovered the Solarcell is 3x bigger than before..

Bombshell still calls for her to meet up in a room for questioning. HOWEVER,Bombshell discovered what happend to her during her sleep. Solarcell realeases a Discharge of highly charge particles like the sun. As she was going to conclude the meeting with Solarcell, The computer put up a force field around Bombshell and the room itself then tells Bombshell to close her eyes. Discharge with in 5, 4, 3, 2, 1….then flash. due to that, comtainment for Solarcell was ordered. At the sametime, she calls in Shell and Relik, to discuss the situation.

Issue2:

Shell relized what was happening and basically told Bombshell that Soloarcell NEEDS to Purge her energy every day. If she does this, she can walk among us for up to 24 hours. 12 hours minimum. Shell ask for the Bujins Help in finding a Japanese Technology to help suppress Solarcell Discharges. In the mean while, Shell puts a monitor on her to both record and let Solarcell know when will her next discharge be.

Later, Shell finds a link between Solarcell and Energize energy. Lets Bombshell know. Bujin ships the NEW Tech to Shell.

Dark Beauty ran off into the Canadian tundra to only be picked up by a SHARD Villian going by the name “Perception”.

Perception is a trickster. (The Reader don't know if thay are Female or a Male) Makes you believe what you want to hear, see and feel. He/She only picks Dark Beauty up due to the SHARD within her. Dark Beauty Follows Perception.

>Solarcell Hangs out with Imp and Ruffrat for a while. That is until she is able to go out into the real world. Vora goes with her as an escort. Thats when She discovers, Astral and Sparkel…at a Club. 

They run into some trouble with a small time villian. Thats when Chaos comes to help stop the villian.

Issue3

Dark Beauty and Perception Find their way to American Soil.

Wireless Gets a 6 month passport to the US. can now freely go back and forth between the US and Canada.

Solarcell finally gets to talk to Azumorph. (she has a crush on him. The first hint of this is in the first issue.) Azumorph don't know how to take that, and get the news that she like him from Vora. (This crush stays that way until she is freed from SHARD. Don't know IF I'm allowed to make them a coulpe or not after. If it does turn out that way, I have a story for that all ready. If not, it will be someone else from out of nowhere. either way she is falling in love with somebody.)

Darkbeauty and Perception Steals very rare items, stones, technology and relics. they want to open the a Doorway to Nth universe. (which they succeed. the stealing will happen durng the course of Solarcells story line. It will not happen all at once.)

Issue 4:

Close to the end, Nth enter the HA universe. (This is when the solarcell and HA story line merge.) A God from my universe finds out that Dark Beauty is Missing. He finds out that Voltfor did and violated the Multiverse Laws. He takes Voltfor with him and “God Travel” the Multiverse. gets to the HA universe. By this time Nth was just defeated by HA. The God removes the SHARDs from both Dark Beauty and Solarcell……BUT only Dark Beauty got her memory back. (The SHARD does diffent things to Immortals,{{{Dark Beauty}}} and Gods{{{Solarcell}}}. once SHARD is removed from Darkbeauty, the part that affected her brain is compleatly healed. However, Solarcell's was not. it remained unhealed.)

Dark Beauty memory came flooding back. She Warned HA who she really is. Her real name is INA and what she has done. A caster for genocide. Solarcell yells back at her and tells her she is not like and would never hurt and body. Bombshell startes to worry a bit until the GOD spoke. “She will remain here. Her memory will never return even with her knowing the turth. Let her live out her days to serve human kind for all the wrong she and her sisters have done.  She will remain lost from which she came.” The GOD turns to Voltfor and takes away his remain SHARD and removed his power. The God then takes Voltfor and DarkBeauty back to their universe.

Issue5:

AT THIS POINT: Solarcell advertures will continue, BUT so will Dark Beauty in the other universe which leads to Solarcell sisters finding out Dark Beauty knows what happen to their Beloved little sister Ina the Indulge now AKA Solarcell.

Solarcell Will be in love. she will also discover that she has FULL Control over her powers. and no longer needs the tech that suppress her powers. (she no longer needs to discharge before going out. she over slept one day. she got scare about the over night discharges and the computer let her know all vitals are normal. No Discharges were recorded.)

Issue 6:

She now Helps HA fight supers. Sparkle get into trouble due to bad deal. She never told Astral about it until now. they call SolarCell to help.

Ina's sister Captures Dark Beauty and forced her to tell them where Ina is. They find out. now then hunt for anyone who can open doors to the multiverse. they even when to Voltfor to see if he can do it again and have no luck. this goes on for a while  until they find a scientist who practice Therory of the Multiverse. He explains in theory and they, being gods, look for ideal items to make his theory work..

Issue7:

Through trial and error they got it. now they need a becon from the ha universe to find it. it took them a while , But they end up using their sisterly bond to find  the HA universe. She then try's to get her sister back, but failed. They end up fighting. Some HA members helped and got rid of her. At the end Ina from the HA universe notices and finds her way to our hero Ina.



Issue8:


Evil Ina is looking for our hero, Ina. They look almost look alike only she is a different color. Orange, black and purple. They
AAANNNNNDDDDDD….thats all I got for now. This is 5 issues by the way. I don't know if I will ever keep up with HA but I will try.

For those who I don't have permission to use yet, I will PQ you when the times Comes. (Still need permission to use VORA, SHELL, RELIC, BUJIN, AZUMORPH, BLUEJAY, IMP, PELIGROSO, TITAN, HUB)
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irrevenant at 6:11AM, Nov. 1, 2014
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Perception sounds like a very cool character.  I look forward to seeing hir in action. :)


There looks to be a timing problem with the current writeup. The start of your issue #1 synchs up perfectly with the start of HA Season #2 and you also have events at the end that tie in with the end of HA Season 2.


The problem is that the Season 2 story arc(s) will take a *lot* longer to tell than the first issue of Solarcell does.  So the end of your first issue refers to (and spoilers!) events that won't have a chance to happen in HA until a year or more later.


Specifically, the stuff with Nth won't have happened in HA by the end of your Issue #1. In fact, at the point you're wrapping up your issue #1 it's likely even the existence of Shard may still be unknown to HA.


The key bit is that Nth will *not* be defeated, or even on the radar by the time your first issue ends.


I'm personally cautious about even a God removing Shard because I think it diminishes the threat.  But we can explain that away as being possible because Shard wasn't at full strength yet, so that's okay.


And it's probably even cool that HA become aware of Shard as this weird thing from another dimension that causes memory loss. That doesn't give away too many hints as to its actual nature so once HA start encountering its (different) effects on Earth, they have no reason to put two and two together until they actually encounter Shard (which at this point looks like being around issue #4 or #5).  At that point, it may even be useful that they recognise it, so long as they aren't aware of its true nature.


In short, so long as it doesn't have anything about Nth in it, and the nature of Shard is kept vague, it should be all good.


You'll have to check with Ironhand, but I don't believe that the Bujin particularly uses advanced technology.


I'm very happy for you to use Chaos. Is the idea that he's visiting Canada for some reason or are they back in America by that point?  Fracture City is a bit run down, but it could well be home to one of Roof Rat's favourite clubs. (Vora could be problematic for any scenes in a club because I believe she's still underage).


I like your outline a lot and look forward to seeing it play out in the comic itself.


I like Solarcell heaps too. She's an interesting character with lots of potential.


PS. The Duck's forums are terrible with line spacing. I've found you need to press Enter *three* times if you want a single blank line between paragraphs.  Your text works perfectly if copy-pasted into Word but the Duck smooshes it into one massive wall of text unless it gets those extra line breaks.
cdmalcolm1 at 9:15AM, Nov. 3, 2014
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irrevenant wrote:Perception sounds like a very cool character.  I look forward to seeing hir in action. :)There looks to be a timing problem with the current writeup. The start of your issue #1 synchs up perfectly with the start of HA Season #2 and you also have events at the end that tie in with the end of HA Season 2.The problem is that the Season 2 story arc(s) will take a *lot* longer to tell than the first issue of Solarcell does.  So the end of your first issue refers to (and spoilers!) events that won't have a chance to happen in HA until a year or more later.Specifically, the stuff with Nth won't have happened in HA by the end of your Issue #1. In fact, at the point you're wrapping up your issue #1 it's likely even the existence of Shard may still be unknown to HA.The key bit is that Nth will *not* be defeated, or even on the radar by the time your first issue ends.I'm personally cautious about even a God removing Shard because I think it diminishes the threat.  But we can explain that away as being possible because Shard wasn't at full strength yet, so that's okay.And it's probably even cool that HA become aware of Shard as this weird thing from another dimension that causes memory loss. That doesn't give away too many hints as to its actual nature so once HA start encountering its (different) effects on Earth, they have no reason to put two and two together until they actually encounter Shard (which at this point looks like being around issue #4 or #5).  At that point, it may even be useful that they recognise it, so long as they aren't aware of its true nature.In short, so long as it doesn't have anything about Nth in it, and the nature of Shard is kept vague, it should be all good.You'll have to check with Ironhand, but I don't believe that the Bujin particularly uses advanced technology.I'm very happy for you to use Chaos. Is the idea that he's visiting Canada for some reason or are they back in America by that point?  Fracture City is a bit run down, but it could well be home to one of Roof Rat's favourite clubs. (Vora could be problematic for any scenes in a club because I believe she's still underage).I like your outline a lot and look forward to seeing it play out in the comic itself.I like Solarcell heaps too. She's an interesting character with lots of potential.PS. The Duck's forums are terrible with line spacing. I've found you need to press Enter *three* times if you want a single blank line between paragraphs.  Your text works perfectly if copy-pasted into Word but the Duck smooshes it into one massive wall of text unless it gets those extra line breaks.



Thank you for the DD paragraph issue. I fixed it so it looks better.




I think you are getting the time lines mixed. I'm going from the current HA Time line. Bombshell still goes to UN meetings still right? So it should be fine.. I'm not worries about HA time line. I will make sure that the time line is sync to one another. Remember, Solarcell will not make any appearance in HA until the Nth era. The Shard will start in her issue. Not the past. It will just be another perspective Her stuff are happening I the back ground of the current HA issue. That simply means the current story happening will continue as planned.


The Bujin use will be to look for a specific tech for Shell. Not that the Bujin has the tech that he needs. (Again not a very long drawn out story…it is just a one to two page cameo. Collecting information about a tech and who is providing it. My goal is not to really have interference heavily with other people's story lines. Quick in quick out. It will not get into crossovers really until the introduction of Solarcell in an HA issue. (Which happens much later. Show I have time. )




Ok I will change out Vora for someone else…forgot she is under age. Any one from HA will due who is over age of course.


Wireless story is still consistent to the Canaidan Law about Supers. The only thing that happens in Canada is the fall of both Dark Beauty and Solarcell. Everything else happens on US soil including


I will not have the God remove the Shard. I'll rewrite something. But I do not want the Shard to be apart of Dark Beauty, and Solarcell after Nth is gone.with the shard gone, It will stop SolarCell's uncontrolable discharge and give Dark Beauty her memory back. Voltfor will have Shard taken away from him. So after this event, Shard will not return.


The details in the script will explain everything and how it will work. So what ever is happening in the HA team, will reflect in SolarCell's story about 5% of the time. Because to be honest, I'm doing this for the enjoyment of the creators and the few followers that are fans of the creators characters. Example. We all now wolverine is apart of the xmen but yet when you read his issue, hardly anything has to do with the xmen. It just his story. His view. Granted that his story does jump into the past, but the reader knows this. I'm also not saying that Solarcell is a part of HA either until I know it is official. It is just another out look on HA during off peak or off hours from the view of Solarcell.


If Solarcell don't make the team , it will simply spin off into her own comic. Which will drastically reduce guest appearances from the HA team. This will defeat the purpose of this issue in the first place.
irrevenant at 6:28PM, Nov. 3, 2014
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Ah okay, that's a lot clearer, thanks.


No, I definitely don't want to discourage you from tying Solarcell into the HA universe! O_O


It's very helpful having Solarcell kickstart the Shard story arc and the stuff you've outlined looks like it's going to be very cool.


If you're going to keep the timeline synced to HA, there shouldn't be any problems.  You say you're not sure don't know if you'll keep up with HA, but what if it's the other way around? Your issue #4 coincides with an HA story that is something like *16* issues away (the season 2 finale).  At one page per week, a rough estimate has the HA Season 2 finale taking place somewhere around late 2022. o_O


Re: Issue #4

After Nth is gone, the shards will stop working anyway.  But, since Voltfor did unusual things with the shards to cause the memory wipe, you could always say that Nth's defeat wasn't enough to completely undo what Voltfor did with those *particular* shards. That way, the God would still need to extract the residual energy and cure Solarcell and DB. That way you can do your storyline as originally planned without giving the impression that shard can be extracted against Nth's will.
cdmalcolm1 at 2:39AM, Nov. 4, 2014
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irrevenant wrote:Ah okay, that's a lot clearer, thanks.No, I definitely don't want to discourage you from tying Solarcell into the HA universe! O_OIt's very helpful having Solarcell kickstart the Shard story arc and the stuff you've outlined looks like it's going to be very cool.If you're going to keep the timeline synced to HA, there shouldn't be any problems.  You say you're not sure don't know if you'll keep up with HA, but what if it's the other way around? Your issue #4 coincides with an HA story that is something like *16* issues away (the season 2 finale).  At one page per week, a rough estimate has the HA Season 2 finale taking place somewhere around late 2022. o_ORe: Issue #4After Nth is gone, the shards will stop working anyway.  But, since Voltfor did unusual things with the shards to cause the memory wipe, you could always say that Nth's defeat wasn't enough to completely undo what Voltfor did with those *particular* shards. That way, the God would still need to extract the residual energy and cure Solarcell and DB. That way you can do your storyline as originally planned without giving the impression that shard can be extracted against Nth's will.

I can go with that. It gives me time to draw what I need. I always have fillers. Plus if I need to, I can always add long fight. I love drawing actions anyway.

The last paragraph you mentioned. I like that idea of removing the energy. Yeah that can work. But the damage that voltfor did was perminate. Only the immortal (DB), was able to heal. Solarcell brain did not heal. Solarcell needs to forget. Other wise she will become her former self. I can't let that happen. It would not be good. There will be times when her sisters find there ways to the ha universe. That will be my big crossover “kill” type moment.

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irrevenant at 1:19PM, Nov. 4, 2014
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That sounds great.

Yeah, I probably should have said “the God would still need to extract the residual energy and cure Solarcell and DB (but Solarcell's memory would still be gone)” or something so it was clearer.

After everything, basically the only change to that issue is the addition of a bit of dialog like “The connection to Nth is gone, but these two shards are still active, maybe because of Voltfor's tampering” before the god extracts them.  Otherwise the audience will be going “Wait, this guy could've just removed the shards at any time?”. 

This is coming together brilliantly. Your Solarcell title is off to a great start already, too.
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cdmalcolm1 at 8:26AM, Nov. 5, 2014
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I'm really trying to fit as much cameos from the HA universe as possible.. Others with appear more frequently than others due to availiblities and timing. I started to draw today on the next installment but I had a commission that came in yesterday. So sometime tonight I will finish the next page.

I'm glad that I have you to correct me and lead me to right direction about the HA universe facts. This forum is just as a look through. I can make changes as it goes along.
ironhand at 2:01AM, Nov. 6, 2014
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Sounds good. Something to be semi-careful of is how in-tune you put this comic with the HA. As irrev said, HA does move pretty slowly compared to how a comic written and drawn solely by you will go. So you may run the risk of being in front of the main comic so the two stories don't run nicely side-by-side. Especially when it comes to the Shard story…so that's something to be cautious of. I like how you stray away from the Shards as the story goes on, though, so that would be a good place to avoid the HA Season 2 ark.

As for The Bujin, I'm happy with you to show him searching for this tech and eventually obtaining it. As long as you run by the finer-details as you get there with me, I'm cool with it. You draw a great Bujin, though…so I'm looking forward to seeing what you can come up with.
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irrevenant at 7:42PM, Nov. 7, 2014
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That was my initial concern too but I believe CD has indicated he's happy to make Solarcell take as long as necessary to synch it up with the HA storyline.  As I understand, he plans for his title to ‘shadow’ the main HA storyline, so his title will show what else is going on simultaneous with the events in HA.  (He's also covering other adventures going on at the same in Solarcell's home universe).
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Sounds good. Something to be semi-careful of is how in-tune you put this comic with the HA. As irrev said, HA does move pretty slowly compared to how a comic written and drawn solely by you will go. So you may run the risk of being in front of the main comic so the two stories don't run nicely side-by-side.
cdmalcolm1 at 6:04AM, Dec. 9, 2014
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irrevenant wrote:That was my initial concern too but I believe CD has indicated he's happy to make Solarcell take as long as necessary to synch it up with the HA storyline.  As I understand, he plans for his title to ‘shadow’ the main HA storyline, so his title will show what else is going on simultaneous with the events in HA.  (He's also covering other adventures going on at the same in Solarcell's home universe).
ironhand wrote:Sounds good. Something to be semi-careful of is how in-tune you put this comic with the HA. As irrev said, HA does move pretty slowly compared to how a comic written and drawn solely by you will go. So you may run the risk of being in front of the main comic so the two stories don't run nicely side-by-side.

About the shadowing HA. Here is what I mean. Once Solarcell and DB enters the HA universe, you will begin seeing the “downtime” of HA stories. it will have mini adventures, to semi drama of some none core members. I will be using a lot of both core and none core team members….again in downtime moments. This should be enough to steer clear of the main story.

I will say this. If at anytime I get to draw again the heroes coming back from a mission like did at the end of the ninja issue, I will cameo Solarcell in the back ground not interacting with anyone….this is to show that she is currently in the HA HQ…..that is if I get the chance to do one of those again.

Also, I came up with two additional stories to conclude the story outline I wrote above.

The sister of Ina, (Solarcell), will be a major problem for Ina, I don't know if I should include another HA team member to help her fight. This where I kind of took a page from dragon ball Z. Instead of fighting this epic battle between siblings in a city, Solarcell make sure that it takes place over water and underwater. It will be the effort in enforcing “reducing collateral damage act.” Something I will mention from time to time during Solarcell's story. The ocean fight, however, Will invoke deadly signs of events which started by Ina's sister. Which I'm not sure if it will happen. The idea behind this deadly event was to invoke the 12 signs of the Zodica.

To give you an idea what that means, think of Scrooge being visited by the ghost. Only Ina will see them….at first. They will interact with HA universe after facing the first sign, Aries. The fight with Aries immediately takes place in the ocean after Ina's sister leaves. This story may not even happen if I don't fix all the points in this story.
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cdmalcolm1 at 4:15AM, Sept. 28, 2015
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Due to delays on HA main issue, syncing the two stories will no longer happen. I will continue the storyline as normal.
cdmalcolm1 at 4:37PM, April 1, 2016
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Currently, I'm pencilling SolarCell mini series and I plan on continue publishing after I get caught up with the story I already written. So basically, it would be easier for me to continue publishing on a regular basis instead of random pages. So far I'm up to the point where RoofRat is escorting Ina to her quarters. She already has met wireless and is about to meet BombShell. So, I'm about halfway done.



DarkBeauty is about to meet perception and I hope it doesn't confuse the reader when they see perception for the first time.



As soon as my art catches up with my written work, I'm gong to start writing how SolarCell meets the HU version of herself. All I can say is, big battle and perception true plans comes to light to HA members.
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cdmalcolm1 at 8:38PM, Feb. 28, 2017
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A new series of Solarcell will launch. How soon? As of right now I don't have a date yet. I will also continue the original mini series as planned. The mini series however will come to an end and will continue in her second series.



The second series will be ahead of HA but I will not compromise any HA story or it's plans for the main HA timeline. The second series will have her going off on her own adventures as a D and C-list hero still under the helpful guide of Bombshell. Basically helping out when ever she can. I don't know when or even if she will be written into the main cast of HA after issue 12, I will be waiting. Oh as far as guess HA member(s) appearing goes in the second series, It will be very short or used as a flashback. Unless, any of you want your character(s) appearing as a regular cast member, let me know. They can be easily written in this version of SolarCell's second series.



cdmalcolm1 at 4:28AM, Jan. 9, 2018
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I Am reformatting SolarCell's layout to the first series. There will be add-ons Panels and redrawn to some panels. I'm also going to Change how I color so that I can produce faster. The Delays are more from the new layout I have going. And there will be a lot less pages. The story will be the same. The release will be soon i hope.
cdmalcolm1 at 1:27PM, April 22, 2019
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New update for SolarCell. SolarCell comic is becoming Rated M for mature. Due to language and tasteful nudes. On the art side of things. The iPad will be my primary drawing canvas for this comic. Many things have changed on my end as far as HA is concern. All my HA ex files for photoshop is currently locked so I’m going to download one of the pages from Dropbox into my iPad. The rest I have to start from scratch. Please bare with me. I’m still trying to get photoshop back on my new PC.

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