Season 1.11
LanceDanger on Dec. 13, 2006
Directly from one of my many notebooks filled with poems/songs XD Anywho, tomorrow is the first season finale! Woo-woo!!!! =D
Frail: Lol, durned containers that hold liquids!!! Sometimes I think I'd feel safer if they sold bottled water/soda or whatever kinda like the hamster waterbottles, so it wont spill over XD Like in RahXephon!
Frail at 2:34PM, Dec. 30, 2006
Freakeh's right, Alvaro, this is really gorgeous. I have a great respect for people who can write poetry. (Can't do it myself...;___;) It's a really emotional portrayal of reality, as they say. You use some lovely imagery which helps carry the message further. ^^ So good! "You helped me walk on water/and I nearly drowned when I tried/to do it on my own." That's my favorite bit. It's very haunting.
Freakeh at 1:29PM, Dec. 14, 2006
Oh... Alvaro that is so beautiful. I think I want to see more of your poems/songs. You have such meaningful wording, especially in these my favourite lines "spiritually sew my eyes shut", "victim of my own circumstance", "my life is not mine to waste", "so as I die a little more everyday/ I try to live for you". I love the prose of it, how the stanza structure changes. The allusion to a timer with "sand-clock" instead for the effect, and then the repitition of that term... It is vain to say that your poetry reminds me of my own? With the different ways of phrasing something, and with the twist at the end to give some hollow optimism. Ohhhh you've made me sad now. And simultaneously made me miss poetry. I want moooooore O=
dracco at 12:10PM, Dec. 14, 2006
You do also poems and songs?!? It's like renaissance artists, they tried all the arts. Way to go!!