Hello I am David, a comic writer! I am currently doing a Kickstarter for a comic that is dark satire on bullying and RPGS.
15 Page Preview https://tinyurl.com/y6zymecs
And the Kickstarter is at - https://tinyurl.com/y4z79zlo
Description:
Demons in the Darkness is a Dark Satire about High School Bullying and the “evils” of tabletop Role Playing Games. Four Kids harness the demonic power of their RPG and summon a creature made of their wrath for those who torment them. This hellspawn goes for to kill their bullies and the gamers try to stop it. Will they succeed or will they even want to?!
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Demons of Darkness Kickstarter!
kawaiidaigakusei at 12:00AM, Sept. 23, 2019
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dotcrossbuns at 11:30PM, Sept. 27, 2019
Also, the teenagers look like adults, and Peter's dialogue is (deliberately?) stilted and unnatural. Real people with Asperger syndrome just talk like people, and to a certain extent they grow out of it.
dotcrossbuns at 2:48PM, Sept. 27, 2019
I read the preview. The art is great (though the Zitz font is an odd choice for a serious story, as it mimics a gag-a-day newspaper comic), but the story doesn't seem appealing so far. I notice this nameless D&D/Settlers of Catan hybrid (?) doesn't require you to roll to see if your attacks succeed, judging by the sequence with Tommy, which would take a lot of the fun out and is asking for people like him to "ruin" the game. The Chick tract "Dark Dungeons" has a similar problem -- the DM declares a character dead seemingly on a whim instead of having the player roll for whether she sees the trap and whether she survives.
AverageArtistAmber at 2:36AM, Sept. 23, 2019
This is what Jack Chick was so afraid of.