epiloge
azuresky on Aug. 29, 2007
ok here it is if people can get me some sprites that look bigger than this ill make it beter……
main chars:
tori prite: pk gold
pokemon : pikachu
max sprite: pokemon sap ema and ruby
is an idiot
pokemon pochena
milly :sap em ruby
very clever
pokemon: ???? an egg
Lexxorodius at 8:19PM, Sept. 12, 2008
FAILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLl.
Black Madness at 5:36PM, June 3, 2008
No offense, I found myself laughing at all the errors and mistakes. Oh and you don't need to rush through. You look like you rushed. Here's the bad "things". 1. VERY BAD speech boxes. Too much un-needed space. 2. I've noticed the buildings in all the panels are "off" their original places. Like the building in the 11th panel doesn't seem to be in place with the same building in the 12th panel. I've done this before, but I corrected my mistakes. :] 3. Um, well, the comic doesn't make much sense. So yeah. Don't rush through! :D
MINIMATTY at 9:00AM, Sept. 18, 2007
no rush, no rush, we're really not that bothered
azuresky at 10:05AM, Sept. 13, 2007
sorry im so late im kinda haveing a lot of home work ill get a new page up soon
azuresky at 6:12AM, Aug. 30, 2007
guess who is that snorlax ^_