The look of you comic has gotten much better but you need to work more on your plot and characters. It's not enough that things just happen and your characters are just there. Remember, this is YOUR world. You're the only one who understands everything with out explanation. Slow things down for a bit. Explain the setting and give you characters proper introducions to help your readers understand what's going on.
Steve the Squirrel at 8:51PM, Feb. 19, 2008
The look of you comic has gotten much better but you need to work more on your plot and characters. It's not enough that things just happen and your characters are just there. Remember, this is YOUR world. You're the only one who understands everything with out explanation. Slow things down for a bit. Explain the setting and give you characters proper introducions to help your readers understand what's going on.