Chapter 1 - Pg 1
Maudey on Dec. 4, 2008
Thank you so much for all the reviews! ;)
Page 1, the story is going to primarily take place in the present for the first chapter, but I couldn't resist drawing the two in their sixties outfits!
Hope you like it! Review!
EDIT: Changed the font color to white! thanx for the advice!
2nd EDIT: It doesn't show up as white for some reason, it comes out as white under the “current graphic for this page” but then won't show up in the actual page when I view it. I'm just going to hope it shows up, ignore it and move on! XD
draconia11 at 8:54PM, Jan. 9, 2009
yay! nice art!
DAJB at 12:55AM, Dec. 6, 2008
I'd suggest you change the colour of the font in that first panel. It's very difficult to read (in fact, I didn't realise there was any text there at first!) Nice art style. Looking forward to the story!