Prologue - Pg4
Freux on March 6, 2007
Sorry this is later than I'd liked for it to be. Apparently having a page ready almost every day is a lot harder than I thought. x_x Kudos to you people who update 3x weekly!
I'm not sure what my favorite thing about this page is. Probably the kid's eyes in panel two. They were sort of fun. Getting his expression close to right was hard. He looked like he was stoned big time in the first sketch, instead of just spacey. Whoo head injuries!
What I hate is that the text bubble chopped his fingers off in panel three. I liked his little fingers! Now his hand looks too big. Bleeeh.
Free write at 4:43PM, March 27, 2008
he looks soo tired of everything The eyes so look spacey It's soo awesome!
Frail at 10:28PM, Dec. 2, 2007
Awwww. He's so *cute*. All in... shock and bloody... just makes you want to take him home. And hug him a bit. Some nice exposition, by the way. >> And I'm still jealous 'bout the crow's awesome.
crazyninny at 7:19PM, Aug. 20, 2007
I think he needs a cookie. ;_;
Fitz at 3:18AM, July 19, 2007
Whoa, amazing work so far. I truly love the artwork. Faved! And indeed his fingers look interesting.
simonitro at 9:19PM, April 25, 2007
The facial expressions are done well on this page!
Epimetheus at 1:38PM, March 15, 2007
Nice art. I'm no expert, but you could update a little faster. ME, i love art, but i'm both not good enough for a comic, and i don't have a scanner.
LanceDanger at 6:23PM, March 7, 2007
The page came out great, though. Really liked the second panel! =3
theorah at 1:33PM, March 7, 2007
Trying to capture a complicated feeling/expression is more fun and challeging, ne? =3 good job! :)
ce33 at 1:03PM, March 7, 2007
It's amazing how out of it a head injury can make people...
JillyFoo at 11:46AM, March 7, 2007
He looks so listless.
NekkoXIII at 4:34AM, March 7, 2007
wonder who the crow is talking about.
Luneko at 1:30AM, March 7, 2007
Aww, poor scrawny likkle boy! With his ears and his eyes... aww. I really like the last panel for some reason. He's all, "Huh? Wha? Is this something on my hand?"
CorruptComics at 12:44AM, March 7, 2007
Stop listening to the demon crow boy, RUN DAMMIT! Run to the bird sanctuary!
Kristen Gudsnuk at 11:39PM, March 6, 2007
poor kid ;_;! you did a great job on those eyes, btw, they're all woozy and depressed... so he's like Wolverine, then (I'm a geek)? a fast healer? cool. yeah updating thrice weekly is really tough... and I take a looong time per page, too... (I'm a little obsessed with making my comic though, so it all works out in the end) but you probably take even longer than me because your pages are so detailed and spiffy looking~! (omg when are ... matthias and matilda? right? ...coming back? they were SOO CUTE!!)
Darwin at 10:03PM, March 6, 2007
Nice Narration from the crow. He looks a little out of sync with what is going on. How in the world did he get in that situation? I'm sure those answers are coming! Lovely work! More please
Zero7 at 10:01PM, March 6, 2007
sweet, update already. Also, first comment, woot!