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Little Swan on June 23, 2009
The overall layout may change, as I shall be trying out many different styles to see which suits me better. I am also toying with the idea of using a slightly different style per story.
Q- Can the writing be read, or should I tone it down a little?
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Patoborracho- Something like that :)
Tommym- Let's hope so! And I'm glad you like the colour. I wasn't sure what to call it, I think Aquamarine is rather correct, thank you.
subs at 6:36AM, July 17, 2009
I can read it well enough:P
tommym at 9:52PM, June 26, 2009
Dear Little Swan, Hi! You have a really really great page here.I think the way it is formated works very well.A balance of art and prose.You also add a bit of mystery about how your grandmother is Mesmerized by the Quiz Show Host. Prehaps you should consider keeping with this format. For a while at least. You have the makings of an Illustrated Gothic Novel (a modern version) Please forgive me, but I had trouble reading some words due to poor formation of letters. If by tone you mean contrast, it's fine, dark words on light background. Tommym P.S. My teachers were very fussy about Penmanship.There were no computers back then. Tommym