Ok Matt, I'll critque your page. I know it's just a title, but it's in poor condition. That yoshi is huge and is floating, that's not right. Robin and the demon thing are supposed to be on the clouds, but their feet aren't touching them. That text is horrid and what the hell is that yellow thing over yoshi's head? I'd rate this page a one, but's it's just a cover.
yoshirider4 at 9:12AM, July 30, 2007
Ok Matt, I'll critque your page. I know it's just a title, but it's in poor condition. That yoshi is huge and is floating, that's not right. Robin and the demon thing are supposed to be on the clouds, but their feet aren't touching them. That text is horrid and what the hell is that yellow thing over yoshi's head? I'd rate this page a one, but's it's just a cover.
yoshirider4 at 12:15PM, July 27, 2007
Ermm... thanks?
Doggeh5775 at 11:45AM, July 27, 2007
Ooooh! Can't wait!
mjfire at 1:49PM, July 22, 2007
This is for u justin and matt By: MJ and M&M