A few tips: a) You should really check for typos and grammatical errors before posting a comic; b) try to avoid covering a character's face with the dialogue ballons whenever possible; and c) never EVER use ridiculous cliches like "Time to die". That never sounds cool.
kILLEVERYTHING at 5:55AM, June 7, 2006
nice !
kINGNOTHING at 10:25PM, June 6, 2006
thanks for the criticism.
evildawn at 10:22PM, June 6, 2006
A few tips: a) You should really check for typos and grammatical errors before posting a comic; b) try to avoid covering a character's face with the dialogue ballons whenever possible; and c) never EVER use ridiculous cliches like "Time to die". That never sounds cool.