One of the comments on our main comic Shades asked for a sample of the script. This is from Chapter 3.
As you can see, originally the panels described here formed part of the last panel of Page 5 and the first three panels of Page 6. However, the artist on Shades (Harsho Mohan Chattoraj) frequently has to split my panels into more than one, so this section eventually became Page 7!
You can see Harsho's rough layouts for this portion of the script on the next page in this Scrap Book. The finished page went live at Shades on Monday (22 October 2007).
Reminder: If you're enjoying the BVC Scrap Book, don't forget to look in on our main comic Shades.