Issue 3 page 4
bravo1102 on May 21, 2012
I keep tweaking and tweaking the speech balloons. It's proving hard to get in all the dialogue and for the page not to look cluttered.
bravo1102 on May 21, 2012
I keep tweaking and tweaking the speech balloons. It's proving hard to get in all the dialogue and for the page not to look cluttered.
bravo1102 at 11:17PM, May 21, 2012
In the original script there were some Buffy the Vampire Slayer references but they just got in the way.
Jamie59 at 6:14PM, May 21, 2012
Careful she bites!
El Cid at 6:55AM, May 21, 2012
LoL! It's good to know at least that the manga character knows she looks weird! This page isn't really cluttered, but what I find is that, when the page is getting too cluttered, that means I should split it up into two pages to give more "breathing room" (not that I actually take my own advice, ever!)