Page 4 : Morning Male Ritual.
ledpusha on May 24, 2007
Here we go. Typical male morning ritual. Flexing in the mirror never gets old lol. This was drawn on 8x11 paper. I should have put this on bigger paper. I am thinking about doing my next pages on 2 sheets of cardstock paper and merging them together in photoshop to see how that works out. And if you have crits about the comic, please let me have it lol. I need to get better at this.
blntmaker at 8:42PM, June 13, 2007
GLEAM? Not BLING??? Love it
mishi_hime at 10:09AM, May 30, 2007
lol. chaos is right...most people forget about about backgrounds, and youre one of them :(
ledpusha at 6:44PM, May 28, 2007
Updates are coming later on this week like wed and on. I have some work that I need to do first before updating.
ledpusha at 9:25PM, May 25, 2007
Thanks for the crit and thanks for the comment on the gleam sound effect. I just got done plotting out page 5 and I will put it on bigger paper so I can add backgrounds.
mapaghimagsik at 7:02PM, May 25, 2007
I do like 'gleam' as a sound effect
deleted-byrequest-03 at 5:54PM, May 25, 2007
Haha, funny! :D You want some crits? Hmmm... Well, I guess I could say that panel 3's screen tones are too big, and they hurt my eyes a little. Also, there should be more backgrounds. Make your lines a little neater, and try not to go over lines when doing screen tones. That's it. Everything else is fine to me :)