its good for a begginer but at least you will improve oh and seriously you need a plot but random fighting can be good to show people what you think when two people fight that cannot in the anime
first off, dont mix bittages, second use backgrounds, third, use speach bubbles, fourth have an actual plot, not just random fighting. i hate people with sucky comics like this. oh and dont use mspaint special effects
poliwirl100 at 2:24PM, Aug. 14, 2008
its good for a begginer but at least you will improve oh and seriously you need a plot but random fighting can be good to show people what you think when two people fight that cannot in the anime
Deathbeamz at 2:28PM, Feb. 27, 2008
first off, dont mix bittages, second use backgrounds, third, use speach bubbles, fourth have an actual plot, not just random fighting. i hate people with sucky comics like this. oh and dont use mspaint special effects
Collossus at 6:46PM, Nov. 9, 2007
You did not do this well at all...