# 1: Beginnings of a Plot
Shiori Tsumi on Sept. 22, 2006
Here it is, the page you've all been waiting for! The ACTUAL FIRST COMIC! If it's a little small, tell me…I'll try to fix that. Kinda new to the computer stuff, even though I'm a really good artist. (Just not backgrounds; they are the bane of my existence.) You'll just have to suffer my backgrounds-the one's that I DO try to draw-until I get much better. Either way…YES, FIRST COMIC UP! And on schedule, too! Shi-chan is a happy artist. ^_^
onianaguma at 3:32PM, March 6, 2007
I think the word you were looking for is MALEVOLENT, not benevolent
Geene76 at 10:47AM, Nov. 11, 2006
Not to be a jerk...but no WHITE folk lived in Massachusetts until the mid-1600's. Aside from that I like you's comic! ^_^
Shiori Tsumi at 7:59AM, Oct. 14, 2006
Ah, sorry, fishie (I like giving people nicknames by the way) I put down benevolent when I was thinking malevolent. Completely my fault there.
your fish are mine at 7:11PM, Oct. 7, 2006
interesting.... but why is she being burned for good acts of sorcery?? did you use benevelent wrong??? the girls expressions are briliant though... :)
Nigellashade at 12:39PM, Sept. 26, 2006
I wonder what will happen next, I can't wait. ^___^ In some way this page gets right to the point, between pasts, & future events. Great update! ~M~ v~~~~v
Ninja_Jette at 2:51AM, Sept. 26, 2006
Looking good! cant wait to see more!
Ninja_Jette at 2:51AM, Sept. 26, 2006
Looking good! cant wait to see more!
Pensuke at 8:41AM, Sept. 23, 2006
Very nice man =D