Chp 1 : Pg 4
Lamiah on May 19, 2009
Bwhahahahaha! Face the wrath of a wanna-be-writer! o_O;
Yes, this is the page where you all comment: “I hate you for making me read too much!” and “So much text?! Noooooo!”
Indeed, my first love is writing. I want to be a well known author someday soon. So, please, just deal with me on this page. I promise we will go back to normal comic bubbles soon!
Little Swan at 9:02AM, July 11, 2009
From Emily Elizabeth; "I'm a writer too, so I know how tempting text is" I totally agree. Very, very interesting storyline and nice philosophy. Definitely faved, A-star!
Graphictruth at 3:07PM, May 30, 2009
I see no problem with it.
Kohath Star at 5:39AM, May 26, 2009
oh O.O retract my last comment...you use more color than blood XD
tommym at 4:20PM, May 21, 2009
Dear Lamiah, I Love women writers.Many comics would be better off if they had some text to explain some of the plot/story they are trying to show. Your page of text tells us alot. Tommym
TokyoRose at 9:04PM, May 20, 2009
Wonderful prose! I love it...my first love was writing as well, so don't feel bad at all...this is a great read.
darkwaterfrey at 8:10PM, May 20, 2009
The writing is just fine. No worries!
theBSDude at 7:52PM, May 20, 2009
"So much text"? That's two paragraphs. Comics like "Charby" have twice that in dialouge alone.
BlkKnight at 6:29PM, May 20, 2009
You need text-heavy sections when there's something you really don't want to dwell on. As long as they're not to frequent.
Deraymou at 5:50PM, May 20, 2009
I'm still intrigued, but not yet completely pleased *sips tea* Proceed...
SquishyNinja at 3:39PM, May 20, 2009
"So much text?! Noooooo!" Just messing with ya ^^ Reading makes everyone smarter, so it's all good =D
Warpedwenger at 3:17PM, May 20, 2009
Alot of dialogue can be a bad thing in a comic but it worked really well on this page.
Dark Pascual at 3:08PM, May 20, 2009
Wow...I love the expressions here...and the dialogue is great... I really don't mind pages with much text. Specially if the text is as good as yours...
Anime Guru at 2:50PM, May 20, 2009
If it moves the story in a good direction, a little text doesn't hurt. Great plot by the way.
Walrus at 1:09PM, May 20, 2009
Awesome art!
cyberdog at 12:53PM, May 20, 2009
oooh, I like your style. I'll have to come back to this one. Hey check out my comic WarriorBorn let me know what you think. NOW TO GO SEE YOUR OLD PAGES!
patoborracho at 12:49PM, May 20, 2009
nice dialogut, this is awesome!!
Pokkon at 12:30PM, May 20, 2009
I agree, it was really nice to read, and the art on this page is very pretty too, so this is another awesome page~! :D
Emily Elizabeth at 12:14PM, May 20, 2009
I'm a writer too, so I know how tempting text is XD You write really well though so it was a pleasure to read ^-^