4.4
sadTakara on Sept. 1, 2009
I'm very happy with how the first panel came out :3 Except for Chris' shoulder, the anatomy on this page is a bit iffy. But I like it no less :D
I hope you guys enjoy it. I had so much to say and now I can't remember.. x.x
katyas at 11:33PM, April 21, 2010
Absolutely BEAUTIFUL - I love the way this page flows and runs together. Very nice.
Dark Ranger at 9:28AM, Sept. 8, 2009
Very nice.
tanjab at 3:31PM, Sept. 4, 2009
I just read up to here, and this is my first comment. i love the story, and i love how the girls are more realistic-drawn than the super skinny ones from most web comics. well done. 10,000 out of five :)
Morgis at 9:04AM, Sept. 4, 2009
:D
RaisaGrantaireJavert at 10:45PM, Sept. 3, 2009
Let me just say, Laci is the single hottest comic character ever.
kanoka at 4:33PM, Sept. 3, 2009
YAY! ohhh sooo oooooo YIPPIE! ya I feel like a giddy school girl. Love the panel with Chris and Laci's faces. That look they share, it reminds me of the first time I was in love.
HitomiAgada at 7:52AM, Sept. 3, 2009
yay, they went at it~
Drakanor Dream at 6:27AM, Sept. 3, 2009
doesn't look bad to me and its still PG-13
Stan Kuri at 11:59PM, Sept. 2, 2009
This makes me miss my girlfriend. D8
nekeko at 7:11PM, Sept. 2, 2009
ACK! *Shields eyes!* NO WAY NO WAY! @///@
Foxy_Kitty_Girl at 2:53PM, Sept. 2, 2009
YAAAY FINNALLY and its so timid and cute
axelia at 12:19PM, Sept. 2, 2009
im also with sky on this one you are a genius at this stuff so have more faith cause we all love ya!!!
JanaGXP at 11:00AM, Sept. 2, 2009
awesome page! :) and I agree with skyeangel
Miki at 10:51AM, Sept. 2, 2009
Its happening!! e///e
artie4 at 10:44AM, Sept. 2, 2009
What Sky said!!!!! Really nice page. Artie
taradaga at 10:04AM, Sept. 2, 2009
OHMYGOSH AWESOME. *dies* So beautiful, love their expressions, their positions!! Very nice.
karuleonnese at 8:29AM, Sept. 2, 2009
Aww...x3 They're just so cute, I swear. An' your anatomy is so pretty...@_@
tommym at 8:12AM, Sept. 2, 2009
Dear Takara, Yes I would mostly agree with Sky. From my point of view N.Y.City's Tri State Area, I can go to the beach or the Fort Tryon park lawn and see women in the barest of bikini's side bi-side rubbing lotion on each other, it's no big deal. Parent's have the responsablity to know the mature-ity level of their off-spring. Art is a record of homo Sapian Sapians story from caves in France done 120,000 ci. ago to the present and hopefuly future. Perhaps you should leave the Teen+ rating and push the limits think Dali or De Sade. Man does not advance being stagant but to Probe "One step Beyond" to reach "The Outer Limits" to "The Fly" into "The Twilight Zone" and to recieve "The Light Packets" before some others.are "The Advantages of Being A Woman Artist" by The Guerilla Girls. Tommym Tommym
Orin J Master at 6:02AM, Sept. 2, 2009
they're not THAT shy....
Dojo at 6:00AM, Sept. 2, 2009
About time! :)
skyangel at 5:15AM, Sept. 2, 2009
You always have so little faith in yourself hon *hugs* I've never known you to turn out a page that was poorly thought out, badly drawn or pointlessly gratuitous. For someone who has the gift to capture and depict feelings and emotions as beautifully as you do I've really been looking forward to these sort of pages. There is nothing offensive in this page other than the suggestion that two girls can want to go to bed together. We are not children reading this, so I think if you keep it as tasteful as this then you should leave the teenplus rating as it is. But art is about the desire to portray our own personal thoughts and feelings so if the urge to get anything down on paper is bursting within you, I would say do it now and remove it later if it causes offence instead of worrying if you should or shouldn't. Even though I love every panel of yours on this page the one that made my heart flutter most was that one where Chris says she is 'kinda shy', I just love the wantoness of a loose dress strap!!
clomle44 at 3:25AM, Sept. 2, 2009
guuuuuuh
Kugai at 1:05AM, Sept. 2, 2009
D'awwwwwwwwwww Cute an' Sexy
Imagine at 12:44AM, Sept. 2, 2009
Oh it finally happened. (Hi, I'm a silent reader). Really like this comic... especially because it was continuously going towards a romantic scene that is now actually happening. I'm a writer myself... and I wonder.. it kind of climaxed here.. what now? Or is this stuff that comes easy for you, and do you already have a just as fun climax as this one?
megan_rose at 11:23PM, Sept. 1, 2009
Wowee! Wow. I love surprise lesbian sex! Way to brighten up my crappy day!