Issue 1 Pg 2
Abt_Nihil on Oct. 16, 2007
I had some trouble coloring this page… at some point I just stopped, because it didn't improve. I'm still not satisfied; I'll just think of it as coloring practice.
EDIT:
TheMidge28: It's great to get positive feedback, maybe I've just been staring at the page for too long :-D And I'm pulling out all the stops to make her embody the very meaning of sexyness here… this is all about having fun with the bombshell concept ^^ As for coloring AD and signifikat: Sorry, but that's not gonna happen, I need some time to work and sleep too :-D besides, they're manga-ish, so the gray tones work better there than on a classic superhero comic like this one.
Nepath: Thanks a lot, I'll try to deliver ^^
Fitz: Really? Woooo… the last panel was the one I had most trouble with :-D Thanks a lot! As for the typeface… it's not Times New Roman, but close enough. I just didn't want it to be my usual “comic” font, and also not something to FX-y or comic-y… do you have a suggestion?
Rockster, DAJB, polo, cs3ink & Qsama: Thanks a lot!
SympleSymon: Thanks very much, a mild fetish won't hurt :-)
leatherwoman: Thanks a lot!
leatherwoman at 11:46PM, Feb. 4, 2008
The coloring looks great, expecially the last panel. Well done!
SympleSymon at 1:31PM, Jan. 25, 2008
Coloring? Bad? You? In what alternartive reality are we speaking here? This page, like the ones before it, just scream plain 'Awesome!' in terms of colour! Great build-up, and like the teasing shot of the glove (not that I have a fetish, or anything).
QSAMA at 7:44PM, Oct. 19, 2007
awsome page this looks great so far! i think the color is really making the pages pop!
Fitz at 9:21AM, Oct. 19, 2007
You are WAY too hard on yourself, my friend! This is well done, and the farther the better! The last panel ROCKS! One hint, perhaps: how about changing the font in the inner monologue? Times New Roman just doesn't seem to fit here, kind of gives it an academic writing feel - or maybe I'm just weird? :)
cs3ink at 8:52AM, Oct. 19, 2007
Faved! Very dynamic storytelling. My compliments to the chef!
polo at 4:37AM, Oct. 19, 2007
Nice ...REAL NICE! THE LAST PANEL KILLS!
DAJB at 11:50PM, Oct. 17, 2007
Great stuff, Abt. Keep it coming!
Nepath at 12:21PM, Oct. 17, 2007
I agree with Midge, the colouring work is excellent. Nice start so far.
TheMidge28 at 12:12PM, Oct. 17, 2007
I have no Idea what you are talking about! This well done! dude comparing this to AD this is phenominal...she is one sexy mutha...I can see huge difference in your talent compared to the older work with AD. Lookin' forward to how this unfolds.