feedback, you say?
Well, I like it! Though on the first page, I'm assuming she's running, but it's a little difficult to tell with what you decided to show and her movements. Maybe try showing a panel of her feet? And the position thing was just the first panel; her elbows are sticking out a bit far for someone who is running away from something. It looked a little more like a jogging pose, or myabe dancing, even...
I'm only being super-ultra nit-picky because you don't have much to give you feedback on yet. But I'm soo faving this!
shino at 8:51AM, Nov. 9, 2007
WOW I LOVE THE WAY every thing looks ... it looks like you use water colors :O
Miruku at 8:58AM, May 11, 2006
feedback, you say? Well, I like it! Though on the first page, I'm assuming she's running, but it's a little difficult to tell with what you decided to show and her movements. Maybe try showing a panel of her feet? And the position thing was just the first panel; her elbows are sticking out a bit far for someone who is running away from something. It looked a little more like a jogging pose, or myabe dancing, even... I'm only being super-ultra nit-picky because you don't have much to give you feedback on yet. But I'm soo faving this!